Clarifying Organizational Goals
Reworking a non-profit's language to clearly explain their purpose
web traffic and volunteer sign ups
SEM Rush Google Suite
New web copy
First client meeting,
Understanding the problem
Branding voice guidelines,
1st draft meeting with client
Redraft the guidelines and copy
Final tweaks and handoff
Final client meeting (about copy) and hand off to web developer
Ubuntu Community Catalyst (UCC) copy was ambiguous around key concepts such as
Who we are
What we do
Why you should choose us
1) To provide clearer answers for these questions and concepts while balancing the empowering language the organization wanted to retain in the redesign.
2) To funnel the majority of users towards the new volunteer sign-up form.
For this opportunity, I worked with Ubuntu Community Catalyst (UCC), in particular Mary Wilson. UCC is on a mission to spark community engagement and neighborhood revitalization in the Atlanta area.
To accomplish this, UCC is building a platform to attract and train community stakeholders with the goal dismantle these issues.
This prota-persona was formed in two ways;
Discussions with the client about their volunteers over the last year. This is where the majority of demographic information came from and where I started to understand more about motivations.
Watching video recordings of volunteers in a setting where they collectively worked together to prioritize resources and efforts (specifically community learning labs and community meetings)
Most likely a mother
Mid 20s to early 40s
Live in the outer Atlanta area, most likely in South Fulton
Finding resources and opportunities to tackle systemic issues in their area
Finding an organization that provides both long and short term opportunities to better the community
Never feeling like they are being given "busy work" volunteering
Being listened to as a voice from the community
Opportunities to collaborate
The research that was the most fruitful was competitive, especially Community Bucket and GeorgiaCCA. Both of these sites showed concise language that still effectively captured the organization's voice.
Example: Community bucket clearly outlines that they make their experience fun, easy and impactful.
Example: UCC uses many words and fails to provide clear, unambiguous examples about why they are unique.
Voice Principles V.01
One of the most critical challenges with the language was making sure that the copy never came off as superior. Weaving themes of empowerment and collaboration is a preventative measure to make sure there is little to no chance of this misconception.
After another meeting with the client for collaboration and refinement, another pillar for the language emerged.
Having a more defined, dimensional, voice gave me more to work with SEO keywords
U.C.C. Original Vision Statement
In its effort to be contained in one sentence, it is a long-winded mission statement. It fails to provide the audience with the organization's long-term goals.
My Revised Vision Statement
The first sentence is for any reader, the second sentence is specifically for the audience's frustration and the third is touches on one of the main tenants of the organization.
After the hand of to the web developer, a google analytics account needs to be set up to track;
Time on the site
Effectiveness of chosen keywords
Since there was no analytical tracking established there is no definitive baseline to compare it to.
The "Nice-To-Haves" That Didn't Happen
Deeper conversations about future writing strategies never happened during this time. My concern is a continued habit of superfluous writing that fails to inform the audience in other mediums or platforms. Under different circumstances, I would have liked to pass on a basic language guideline to the organization.
Having a content strategy that integrated the design of the volunteer form as well would've been desirable nice-to-have.
A persona that was shaped by user interviews. As mentioned above, the persona process was developed by an analysis of the services sought and interviews with the founder of the organization.
The UX of Ubuntu Community Catalyst demonstrated the importance of addressing the user's intent in the copy. Once that was addressed, the uplifting tone from the original could be reapplied. With defined language guidelines, the user's frustrations can be anticipated, not exacerbated with unclear text.